Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
 Anna's submission: | Average Rating: |
I had my birthday party. It was very cool. I have many guests and we have danced. They presented ne a big Tedybeer.
Submitted over a year ago
Please Login to Review this SubmissionLogin |
Reviews
Tips for Good Reviews:
Be Specific
- Give useful suggestions and examples.
- Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
- Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
- Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
- Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
- Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.
I had my birthday party. It was very cool. I had many guests and we have danced. They presented me a big Tedybeer.
I had a birthday party...I had many guests and we danced. They gave me (or presented me with) a big teddy bear.
really good effort just a few corrections:
I had my birthday party. It was very cool. I had many guests and we danced. They presented me with a big Teddybear.
Spelling corrections
Grammar corrections
Look at Rose's correction, good job!
See corrections by Rose. Well done.