English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I go to a park, I usually just take a walk and relax. We have many parks in Japan, but they are very different from those in America. Due to climate, I think, there are little lawn and most of the land in parks are sand. I wish we had more green.

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k-san

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Due to the climate, I think, there are is little lawn and most of the land in parks are is sand. I wish we had more greenery.

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Gidday Emy,

Strange to say, even though we think it sounds plural, we write in singular, as I shall show you.

"Due to climate, I think, there is little lawn and most of the land in parks is sand.

I stand to be corrected.

English language is so tricky!

Best regards

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