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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 5

Comparisons and Superlatives

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from the lesson, compare a set of objects. EX. This dog is bigger than that dog.

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The bag I bought yesterday is bigger than your bag given by his friend. The cat is fatter than that cat. The building is very grand than that building. The car is enormous than that car you bought. The basket is smaller than the box. Nowadays the electronic devices are modern than the last devices.
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  • Hannah Gabriela
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    Hi dear, very good, you wrote a lot and that's the way!!

     

    Some corrections:"The bag I bought yesterday is bigger than your bag given by his friend. This cat is fatter than that cat. This building is bigger than that building. The car is enormous than that car you bought(You can say: "This car is enourmous but that cat is more!; or; this car is bigger than that car). The basket is smaller than the box. Nowadays the electronic devices are modern(I don't know if the word "moderner" exist.) than the last devices."Keep going and congratulations!
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  • Appleton
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    hmm some of your sentences do sound too logical.. let us see what I can do to help :)

    The bag I bought yesterday is bigger than your bag given by his friend. (it is confusing with I , his friend, and your, this is three different people?)The  This cat is fatter than that cat. The other building is very grand much more gra than that building.  This car is more enormous than that car you bought. The basket is smaller than the box. Nowadays the electronic devices are more modern than the last devices.

    Good job though!

    ~Kate
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  • YeLinTun(Mr.Pea...
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    Excellence

    Nowadays, the electronic devices are more modernize than previous.
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  • Jake Snow
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    Bravo!
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