Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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Man is handsome and rich. Woman is tall and thin. Boy is short and fat. Girl is poor and thin. You are beautiful and good-looking. I am kind and happy.
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Very good :) You forgot to use the word "the" in front of the people you were describing. Also beautiful and good-looking are very similar. It might have been better to use a different word, maybe "You are tall and beautiful."
The man is handsome and rich. The woman is tall and thin. The boy is short and fat. The girl is poor and thin. You are beautiful and good-looking. I am kind and happy.
The man is handsome and rich. The woman is tall and thin. The boy is short and fat. The girl is poor and thin. You are beautiful. I am kind and happy.
The man is handsome and rich. The woman is tall and thin. The boy is short and fat. The girl is poor and thin. You are beautiful and good-looking. I am kind and happy.