English Writing Exercise Describe People
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.
When I go to the park, I play football with my son. We gather there to eat our food and do puzzles.
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When I go to the park , I play football with my son. We gather to have our food, and we play puzzles.
What a nice day at the park, Nash.
Please take note of the revision:
When I go to the park , I play football with my son. Afterwards, we get together to eat and play with puzzels.
Comments:
Begin each sentence and the pronoun I with a capital letter.
When I go to the park , I play football with my son.
The word park is not a proper noun. It does not name a specific park so it does not require a capital letter.
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Conor123 has the best spelling/correction. Here is another way but Conor's is most similar to yours.
My son and I play football in the park. After, we eat food and play with puzzles.
CORRECTION:
SPELLING
football (not footbale)
gathering(not gathirng)
puzzles(not pazzels)
GRAMMAR:
I play football with my son.(not I play with my son a footbale)
"We get together to have a picnic" is better than saying "gathering to have our food".
We do puzzles. (we dont PLAY puzzles.)
CORRECTED VERSION:
When I go to the park, I play football with my son. We get together at the park to have a picnic. We also do puzzles.
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You have a few mistakes but it is ok.
"very nice work "