A Shopping Trip
Instructions:
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4
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Last time I shopped some books about Sales/Marketing from a chain super store situated in Singapur at orchard.Normally I like to live alone after my professional workings because I want to recharge myself.
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Hi Qaiser! This is very good indeed. just a couple of minor points - 'shopped for some books', at orchard? - do you mean 'at Orchard Street' or something similar. In UK English we always use the word'Street' or 'Road, or whatever, but in US English you can say 'at Orchard', but you do need the capital letter to show that you aren't talking about any bunch of fruit trees. - professional workings
Do you mean 'live' alone or 'be' alone, there's asubtle difference? Have a good weekend recharging, Derek
orchard--not clear what you mean. Say Orchard Road.
English is Singapore, not Singapur
Stan ^_*
Last time I went shopping was for shopped some books about Sales/Marketing from a chain super store on Orchard Road situated in Singapore. Singapur at orchard. Normally I like to be live alone after my work professional workings because I want to recharge myself.
The last time I went shopping . . .
it means u want to relax and want to become mentally free from all tensions through hard work
Last time I shopped some books about Sales/Marketing from a chain super store situated in Singapur at orchard.Normally I like to live alone after my professional workings because I want to recharge myself.
The last time I went shopping it was for some sales/marketing books. I went to a chain super store in Singapore at The Orchard. Normally I like to be alone after work to recharge.
Very good!
it was a good way to keep urself get mentally relaxed