Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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On April twenty-seventh i'm going to visit my sister and her husband. At First she like it to prepare good food and whenever she has visitors, she like it to make a surprise.
Wednesdayth i finish my work thirty minutes earlier than on the other days.
At fourth day in juni we have full moon and ever i sleep badly.
Wednesdayth i finish my work thirty minutes earlier than on the other days.
At fourth day in juni we have full moon and ever i sleep badly.
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On April twenty-seventh I'm going to visit my sister and her husband. She likes to prepare good food and surprise everyone whenever she has visitors. On wednesdays I finish my work thirty minutes earlier than on the other days. The fourth day of June (or June the 4th) we had a full moon and I slept badly.
Good work Schiller! Only minor changes. You are very understandable.
Grüße,
Mike
O On April twenty-seventh I'm going to visit my sister and her husband. At First She likes it to prepare good food and whenever she has visitors, she likes it to make it a surprise. Wednesdays th I finish my work thirty minutes earlier than on the other days. AtOn the fourth day in June juni we will have a full moon and I always ever i sleep badly.
This is all understandable, just not grammatically correct.
Always capitalize "I" when referring to yourself, also months and start of sentences.
As you other reviewers have said, there are just some grammar issues, but I still easily understood what you were trying to communicate.
Please see Mike's comment.
Last sentence you can say either "On the fourth day of June, we had a full moon and I slept badly." Or "On the fourth day of June we will have a full moon and I shall always sleep badly. If you applied "Past Perfect Tense" (had done something), the action had been taken and finished in the past. But of you apply "Present Future Tense" (will do/shall do something), the action will be done in the future).
I'm going to visit.... At first She likes to prepare good food and whenever she has visitors. She also likes to make a surprise of it.
Wednesday I finish work half an hour earlier...
On the 4th of June we have a full moon. At full moon I always sleep badly.