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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is October 24, 2009. In the morning it was raining but now it is a nice day, the sun is shining and it is warm. The temperature is 20 celsius degree. Tomorrow we will have a beautiful day: fresh in the morning and warm in the afternoon. THANK YOU FRIENDS!
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  • TheNuttyOne
    Mochapoints: 30177  |  Teacher Score: 14571 (100%)

    Today is October 24, 2009. In the morning it was raining but now it is a nice day, the sun is shining and it is warm. The temperature is 20 degrees celsius. Tomorrow we will have a beautiful day: fresh in the morning and warm in the afternoon. THANK YOU FRIENDS!

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  • wyatt4500
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    Very good, Maria!

    Today is October 24, 2009. In the morning it was raining but now it is a nice day.  The sun is shining and it is warm.  The temperature is 20 celsius degrees Celsius. Tomorrow we will have a beautiful day. It will be cool/ fresh in the morning and warm in the afternoon.  THANK YOU FRIENDS!

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