Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today is Sunday, October 25, the clime it's very hot, now is night but to day was worse, do not it is raining and I do not know the weather forecast tomorrow.
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sorry, my native language is not english ;S
good but have to practice (today was worst(??)); do not it is (??) maybe you want to say: it's not raining...(!?)
Today is Sunday, October 25. The temperature is very hot. Now it is night, but the day was worse. It is not raining and I do not know the weather forecast for tomorrow.
Good job! Keep trying.
Good.
Today is Sunday, October 25th. It is very hot. Now it is night, but the during the day it was worse. It is not raining and I do not know the weather forecast for tomorrow.
Olá Newton,
I would write it like this:
Today is Sunday, October 25th. The weather is very hot. The heat was bad during the day, but it is cooler now because it is nighttime. It is not raining and I do not know the weather forecast for tomorrow.
Climate is used in a broader sense of weather, like the climate of Brazil is hot and humid, whereas, weather, is a better word for the conditions of the weather, hot, cold, raining, windy.
Good job! Keep at it.