Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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In the city i prefer to use bycicle. Somethimes I am getting on my bycicle and i make a roundtrip in my city. To visit my friends i m going by train. I m getting off the train and i do the rest by bus to final destination...
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bicicle should be "bicycle"
I am getting should be "I get"
i should be "I"
I m getting off should be " I get off"
Overall, looks quite nice. I am learning German.
Letter "I" should always be in capitals. You also need to practice more grammar.. With practice you will improve!
"In the city i prefer to use the bicycle. Sometimes I am get on my bicycle and I around my city. To visit my friends I go by train. Then I get off the train and I go the rest of the way by bus to the final destination..."
Or - "Then I get off the train and take a bus to the final destination..."
Not bad dear! It is good.. :)
I missed a few errors, here is the final correction...
"In the city I prefer to use the bicycle. Sometimes I get on my bicycle and I go around my city. To visit my friends, I go by train. Then I get off the train and I go the rest of the way by bus to the final destination..."
Or - "Then I get off the train and take a bus to the final destination..."
thank u much!