Describing Objects and their Locations
Instructions:
Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 2
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The man is in front of the brown chair, The woman is on the chair, The cat is on the box,The grils is beteween of bedroon and your kichen, The dog is near of the swinpool, The mother keep your son near the sbed because The baby is sleepy, The cat is across the street, The children are near the your mother, The motlher care the babies in the sofa, but the bebies hate sleep on the sofa, Their prefere sleep on the bed and in the room confortable with wind and pleasant smell...
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Hi Fernanda,
The man is in front of the brown chair. The woman is on the chair. The cat is on the box. The girls are between the bedroom and the kitchen. The dog is near the swimming pool. The mother keeps her son near the bed because the baby is sleepy. The cat is across the street....
You are obviously very smart Fernanda, but you should try to focus on writing short sentences. Begin them with a Capital letter and end them with a period. When you use a comma between every sentence it reads like one long never-ending sentence. :)
Muito bem Fernanda. Suas frases são mais difíceis que as usuais. Mas eu acho que deve ser assim. Se ficar só no fácil não há progresso.
The man is in front of the brown chair, The woman is on the chair, The cat is on the box,The grils are beteween of the bedroom and your kichen, The dog is near of the swimming pool, The mother keeps her son near the bed because the baby is sleepy, The cat is across the street, The children are near the their mother, The mother takes care of the babies in the sofa, but the bebies hate to sleep on the sofa, They prefere to sleep on the bed and in the confortable room in the wind and pleasant smell...
valeu Gaudio!!!