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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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It´s five building and four are green and tree are brown, Ten flowers aren´t yellow, It´s five car in the garege, Four are whitw and One is black, The door is brown and The nine bu is yellow, It´s seven dogs in the park and it´s two clouds in the sky... :D
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  • Howard
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        Hi Fernanda,

        There are five buildings. Four are green and three are brown. Ten flowers aren't yellow. There are five cars in the garage. Four are white and one is black. The door is brown. There are seven dogs in the park and two clouds in the sky....=)

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  • Brian
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    There are five buildings. Four buildings are green. The trees are brown.

    There are five cars in the garage.

    There are seven dogs in the park.

    There are two clouds in the sky.

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  • charlie Buck
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    these are five buildings.Four are grenn & 3 is brown. there is 5 cars in garage.

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  • William
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    Great Fernanda! You're writing great! Remember to use "There are" instead of "It's" when refering to multiple things. "There are five buildings. Four buildings are green and three are brown. " You're really doing well! I wish my Portuguese was this good! Have a wonderful weekend! William

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