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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2

What are you doing this week?

Instructions: What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?

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This week I am planning to read some books about "thinking". I am still in my 3 months holiday, so I am thinking of spending a few times in the district's library. There will be no busiest day if I kept on my original plan, however if I change some of my plan, then I might get busy.

I also am thinking on few possibilities on getting some part-time job, but this plan seems a little bit hard to work. Part-time job is not very popular in my district and plus it's also hard to find a suitable job.

Meanwhile, I am also planning on having some letters posted for my best friend and my foreign friend in China, but it will take some more times because of the address problem.

Anyway, if anyone would like to have a pen-pal friend from Malaysia, I would like to offer one for you, that is ME!
\(^_^)/

Have a nice day everyone!!
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  • Transparent
    Mochapoints: 6530  |  Teacher Score: 1496 (0%)

    1. times use time.

    2.again times mistake.

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  • Grant
    Mochapoints: 65317  |  Teacher Score: 41398 (99%)

    This week I am planning to read some books about "thinking". I am still in my 3 months holiday, so I am thinking of spending a few times in the district's library. There will be no busiest day if I keep to my original plan, however if I change some of my plan, then I might get busy. I am also thinking  on few possibilities of getting a part-time job, but this plan seems a little bit hard to work. Part-time jobs are not very popular in my district and plus it's also hard to find a suitable job. Meanwhile, I am also planning on having some letters posted for my best friend and my foreign friend in China, but it will take some more times because of the address problem. Anyway, if anyone would like to have a pen-pal friend from Malaysia, I would like to offer one for you, that is ME! \(^_^)/ Have a nice day everyone!!

    very good work

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  • mohamed
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