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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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On my desk I have some papers, a computer, some pens, a colorprinter and some books. In the drawers I have some pictures of my family, a mobile phone, some documents and a calculator.
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  • Tony the Tiger
    Mochapoints: 7515  |  Teacher Score: 6914 (0%)
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  • Tony the Tiger
    Mochapoints: 7515  |  Teacher Score: 6914 (0%)
    Muito bom!! Bem escrito. On my desk, I have some papers, a computer, some pens, a colorprinter, and some books. In the drawers, I have some pictures of my family, a mobile phone, some documents and a calculator.
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  • Robert
    Mochapoints: 13966  |  Teacher Score: 4011 (100%)
    Quase perfeito. Eu acho que colorprinter deveria ser "color printer".
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  • JOSE ADEMAR
    Mochapoints: 2839  |  Teacher Score: 282
    Parabéns Luciana, você leva geito, é 10! Continue em frente.
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  • Cosmo
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  • Cosmo
    Mochapoints: 3802  |  Teacher Score: 2847 (0%)
    Excellent job -- the only improvement would be ''color printer''
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  • Texasbuckaroo
    Mochapoints: 6068  |  Teacher Score: 5116 (100%)
    Good job Luciana. Make the color printer change and it will be perfect. Keep up the good work. Tim
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