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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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I am a teacher.The man is a mechanic. He is not a student.
I am a bus driver.The woman is a doctor. She is not a teacher.
I am a nurse. The man is a police officer.He is not a doctor.
you are a mailman. He is a manager. He is not a scientist.
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  • madrugada28
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    Jessica, very good.

    "I am a teacher.The man is a mechanic. He is not a student. I am a bus driver.The woman is a doctor. She is not a teacher. I am a nurse. The man is a police officer.He is not a doctor. You are a mailman. He is a manager. He is not a scientist."

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  • cleildo dias
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  • cleildo dias
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    very good

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  • Younes
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    I am not a mailman.

     

    But

    Your job is very good

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