Describe your clothes
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?
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I would like to tell about my country. To begin with I'd like to say that the Russian Federation is the largest country in the world. It occupies about one seventh of the earth's surface.
We have steppes in the south, plains and forests in the midland, tundra and taiga in the north, highlands and deserts in the east. There are over 2 million rivers in Russia. The country is rich in beautiful lakes. The world's deepest lake, Baikal, is situated in Russia. They say, that the water in the lake is so clear, that if you look down you can even count stones on the bottom. Russia has one sixth of world's forests.
Another point I want to deal with is the Russian language. Russian is the first language of more than 220 million of people throughout the world, and it is the official language of Russian Federation. Russian, in fact, is among the 4 most widely spoken languages in the world.
To my mind, Russians have many peculiarities. They are very hospitable, fond of being with other people and enjoying social life.
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Hey, this is an excellent text and a really good advertisement for your country:) I only found a few small mistakes and changed one word. Well done.
Russia has one sixth of world's forests. Another point I want to deal with is the Russian language. Russian is the first language of more than 220 million of people throughout the world, and it is the official language of the Russian Federation. Russian, in fact, is among the 4 most widely spoken languages in the world. To my mind, Russians have many qualities.peculiarities. They are very hospitable, fond of being with other people and enjoying social life.
2,000,000 rivers?
...of the world's surface. ...of the Russian Federation.
I would like to tell you about my country. To begin with I'd like to say that the Russian Federation is the largest country in the world. There are over 2 million rivers in Russia. The country is rich with beautiful lakes. Another point I want to bring-up with is the Russian language. Russian is the first language of more than 220 million of people throughout the world, and it is the official language of Russian Federation. Russian, in fact, is among the 4 most widely spoken languages in the world. In my mind, Russians have many peculiarities. They are very hospitable, fond of being with other people and enjoying social life.
I would like to tell you about my country. To begin withm, I'd like to say that the Russian Federation is the largest country in the world. It occupies about one seventh of the Earth's surface. We have steppes in the south, plains and forests in the midland, tundra and taiga in the north, highlands and deserts in the east. There are over 2 million rivers in Russia. The country is rich in beautiful lakes. The world's deepest lake, Baikal, is situated in Russia. They say, that the water in the lake is so clear, that if you look down you can even count stones on the bottom. Russia has one sixth of world's forests. Another point I want to deal with is the Russian language. Russian is the first language of more than 220 million of people throughout the world, and it is the official language of The Russian Federation. Russian, in fact, is among the 4 most widely spoken languages in the world. To my mind, Russians have many peculiarities. They are very hospitable, fond of being with other people and enjoying social life.
sorry Irina, I came late to review this; excellent quality; a few minor errors, but nothing serious. Congratulations; you have made a lot of progress.
Oscar.
Hi my friend, your English is improving very fast.this text is very good. well done!
I would like to tell you about my country. To begin with, I'd like to say that the Russian Federation is the largest country in the world. It occupies about one seventh of the Earth's surface. We have steppes in the south, plains and forests in the midland, tundra and taiga in the north, highlands and deserts in the east. There are over 2 million rivers in Russia. The country is rich in beautiful lakes. The world's deepest lake, Baikal, is situated in Russia. They say that the water in the lake is so clear that if you look down you can even count stones on the bottom. Russia has one sixth of world's forests. Another point I want to deal with is the Russian language. Russian is the first language of more than 220 million of people throughout the world, and it is the official language of The Russian Federation. Russian, in fact, is among the 4 most widely spoken languages in the world. In my mind, Russians have many peculiarities. They are very hospitable, fond of being with other people and enjoying social life.