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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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Flowers're on the table and sweets're in the box. The book is in the box and cups're on the table.
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  • Cinzia
    Mochapoints: 7579  |  Teacher Score: 2867 (82%)

    (The) flowers are on the table and (the) sweets are in the box. The book is in the box and (the) cups are on the table.

     

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    Very well done :) just don't use the apostrophe with "are" (for example, flowers're), it's only used with pronouns (ex. they're, you're... etc.)

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  • Owen
    Mochapoints: 1109  |  Teacher Score: 712 (100%)

    Very good try just a few corrections:

    The flowers are on the table and the sweets are in the box. The book is in the box and the cups are on the table.

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    P.S An apostrophe is to indicate missing letters incontractions such as "isn't", "doesn't" and "can't"

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  • Ramblin
    Mochapoints: 143945  |  Teacher Score: 137047 (100%)

    The flowers are on the table and the sweets are in the box.  The book is in the box and the cups are on the table.

     

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