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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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Tomorrow I must to buy one newspaper in English language to improve my reading skill. Unfortunately I must to go at the main town to find one newspaper kiosk that sell foreign newspaper or magazines.
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  • cleildo dias
    Mochapoints: 46189  |  Teacher Score: 33805 (83%)
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  • cleildo dias
    Mochapoints: 46189  |  Teacher Score: 33805 (83%)

    very good

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  • zvim
    Mochapoints: 2402  |  Teacher Score: 1081 (0%)

    Tomorrow I must to buy one a newspaper in English language to improve my reading skills. Unfortunately, I must to go at  to the main town town centre (or downtown) to find one a newspaper kiosk (or newsagent) that sells foreign newspapers or and magazines.

     

    Not too bad, David. Good job.

    You should not use an article (to) after modal verbs(may, can must, should, ought, would...) like in the passage above:

    must do something (correct), must to do something (incorrect)

    can do something (correct), cannot to do something (incorrect)

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  • michelle
    Mochapoints: 23759  |  Teacher Score: 23027 (100%)

    Good, David. 

    Michelle

    Tomorrow I will must to buy a one newspaper written in English language to improve my reading skill. Unfortunately, I must travel to go at the main town to find the one newspaper kiosk that sells foreign newspapers or magazines.

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  • Ruta
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    I agree with zvim about the mistakes, otherwise - very good!

    Submitted over a year ago

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