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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today is a hot weather. It is sunny now. My sister wearing sunglasses.
Yesterday was a cold day. I was wearing a raincoat and a scarf because was snowing.
Tomorrow will be a warm day. He has a white hat because will go at the beach.
Why do they have an umbrella now ? because is raining.
The day before yesterday was a cloudy weather. We had black sweaters
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  • Martin
    Mochapoints: 3971  |  Teacher Score: 1497 (100%)

    Today's weather is hot. It is sunny now. My sister is wearing sunglasses. Yesterday was a cold day. I was wearing a raincoat and a scarf because it was snowing. Tomorrow will be a warm day. He'll wear a white hat  because he will go to the beach. Why do they have an umbrella now ? Because it is raining. The day before yesterday was a cloudy weather. We wore black sweaters.
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  • Tony
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    Today the weather is  a  hot weather.  It is sunny now.  My sister is wearing sunglasses. Yesterday was a cold day.  I was wearing a raincoat and a scarf because it was snowing.  Tomorrow will be a warm day.  He has a white hat because he will go to the beach. Why do they have an umbrella now? Because it is raining.  The day before yesterday was a cloudy day (or it was cloudy). We had black sweaters.
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