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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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The last time I was at the vacation in the West Ukraine.At the Solt lake Town.The most visited place in this part of Ukraine.It is not to far from my house,just 200 km.It tooks a couple of hours to get there.I paid for the trip in one way 50 grivnas.It's not to much!
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  • Valentine
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    The last time I was at the on vacation, I was in the West Ukraine.At the in Solt Lake Town (or Solotvuno) -- the most visited place in this part of the Ukraine. It is not too far from my house, just only 200 km away. It takes a couple of hours to get there. I paid for the one-way trip ticket in one way in the amount of 50 grivnas (or I paid 50 grivnas to get there). It's not too much money!

    Nice to meet you, Olga!  Good work!

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  • Sonji
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    Nothing to add.....Valentine is native speaker, soo.... :-)

    Very good!

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  • Arvonius
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    The last time I was on vacation was when I went to the Solt Lake Town in West Ukraine. It is the most visited place in this part of Ukraine. It is not too far from my house, just 200 Km away. It took a couple of hours to get there, and I paid 100 Grivnas for the round trip, which was not too much!

    Hello Olga. Welcome to our group of Friends!

    You have made a good effort with this exercise. Please study the changes very carefully.

    Did you mean "Salt Lake"?

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  • alan kaplan
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    Good work, always start a new sentence with a blank space. THis is a very good job. Good luck.

    The last time I was at the on vacation I was in the West Ukraine, At the in Solt lake Town. The most visited place in this part of the Ukraine. It is not to far from my house, just 200 km. It tooks a couple of hours to get there. I paid 50 grivnas for the trip in one way. 50 grivnas. It's not to much money!

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  • Engelchen
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    I agree with Valentine, too!

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