Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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I always go the café to have a rest in the afternoon. I drink an occasional cup of coffee, but usually I take tea. The Wu Long tea is my favorite. I love tiramisu, it’s so delicious. I often order the same thing. At the café, I can read books and magazines, surf the internet with laptop, talk with the other friends. I love café, it has been became a part of my life.
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...I love Tiramisu. It's so delicious. ...surf the internet with my laptop, and talk with the other friends. I love the cafe. It has been became become a part of my life.
Excellent writing! Some mistakes, but overall I am very pleased with your writing. Good work! I am proud of you!
I always go to the café to have a rest in the afternoon. Occasionally, I drink an cup of coffee, but usually I drink tea. The Wu Long tea is my favorite. I love tiramisu because it’s so delicious. So, I often order the same thing. At the café, I can read books and magazines, surf the internet with my laptop, talk with the other friends. I love café and it has been become a part of my life.
Very nice job, Jamie! Keep learning & never give up!
加油！It has flair. Small mistakes, but you convey the experience. It's exciting.
surf with my laptop / the laptop. talk with my other friends / with other friends. I love the / this cafe...
很好，Jamie！
I always go to the café to have a rest in the afternoon. I drink an occasional cup of coffee, but usually I take tea. The Wu Long tea is my favorite. I love tiramisu. It’s so delicious. I often order the same thing. At the café, I can read books and magazines, surf the internet with my laptop and talk with the other friends. I love the café, it has been become a part of my life.
Other people have made the same corrections I would make. Well done!
I always go the café to have a rest in the afternoon. I drink an occasional cup of coffee, but usually I take have tea. The Wu Long tea is my favorite. I love tiramisu, it’s so delicious. I often order the same thing. At the café, I can read books and magazines, surf the internet with my laptop or talk with the other friends. I love the café, it has been become a part of my life.
Your writing is always a please to read! :-)
Well done, I agree with the other corrections and also want to say that I like your description.
Wo gen tamen tong yi! Hen hao! Sounds like fun. Keep up the good work!And yes Tiramisu is great!!