My Country
Instructions:
Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4
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Now it is six p.m. Fifteen minutes ago was a quarter to six. thirthy minutes ago was five hours and thirty minutes.
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Olá,
Now it is six p.m. Fifteen minutes ago it was a quarter to six. Thirthy minutes ago it was five thirty.
It is 6 p.m. now. It was a quarter to six fifteen minutes ago. It was five thirty (or half past five) thirty minutes ago.
Good job! The way you did it is correct, but it is easier and better to write it in the reverse order.
I would say "It was a quarter to six...", "It was half past five...". And imho it's better to change words order: 'ago' and other adverbal modifiers should be put in the end of the sentence.
Nevertheless, it was well-done )) I liked it )
Good job. Keep it up!
I agree with others. Please keep a note of others comment and go ahead.
Good job! Here's how I would write it:
Now it is six pm. Fifteen minutes ago it was a quarter to six. Thirty minutes ago it was five thirty.
Hope that helps. =)