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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 5

Morning Routine

Instructions: Describe your morning routine. Do you drink coffee? Take your car to get gas? Watch TV?

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I'm drinking the coffe every morning at a quarter past seven. I'm holding the coffe in the right hand. I'm watching TV at half past seven. I'm going to office at eight o'clock. I'm writing with my right hand. I'm putting gasoline into the car every Friday.
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  • dcrespo148 Дугл...
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    I'm drinking the coffee every morning at a quarter past seven. I'm holding the coffee in the my right hand. I'm watching TV at half past seven. I'm going to office at eight o'clock. I'm writing with my right hand. I'm putting gasoline into the car every Friday.

    que bueno!

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  • lchechar
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    Here's a better way to write the paragraph:

    I drink coffee every morning at a quarter past seven. I hold the coffee in my right hand. I watch TV at seven-thirty. I go to the office at eight o'clock. I write with my right hand. I put gasoline into the car every Friday.

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  • ferfurr
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    Kryssttyna, I agree with the previously submitted comments on how to write this.  A good way to know the difference between "I am drinking" and "I drink" is that when you use the verb "is" such as "I am drinking" and "I am writing" it is something you are doing right now.  You use the verb by itself without "is" such as "I drink", or "I write" when you are describing something you do frequently or habitually.  I hope this helps!

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  • krgray
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    I drink the coffee every morning at a quarter past seven. I hold the coffee in the right hand. I watch TV at half past seven. I go to the office at eight o'clock. I write with my right hand. I put gasoline into the car every Friday.

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  • wolverine
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    dear neighbour it's almost perfect, but your mistake about   tense , if you are doing something right now for example as you said, ''I'm drinking coffee'' , but if you do that always, you should say ''I drink coffee everyday'' your grammar knowledge is pretty  good, go ahead, im not perfect in English too by the way, :)  just you should  pay attention to tense :)  good luck, pe curand , buna ziua :)

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  • cleildo dias
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    very good

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  • canasta
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    I agree with lchehar and ferfurr. 

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