Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today is november 3th. It was a hot and wet day. The max. temperature was about 33 Celsius degree and now ( it is 10:20 pm) the temperature is 27 degrees. Tomorrow we hope a day similar today that is to say hot and humid and it is possible to it's rains tomorrow afternoon.
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Very good. Just a bit of fine tuning and you'll write fluently in no time.
Today is the 3rd of November. It was a hot and wet day. In the morning, the maximum temperature was about 33 degrees Celsius and now it is 10:20 pm, the temperature [dropped to 27 degrees celsius] is 27 degrees. We hope that tomorrow's weather would be as good as today which was hot and humid and [the forecast said that it might rain tomorrow afternoon] it's possile that it might rain tomorrow afternoon.
NOTE THAT:
always with the number 3 it's [third 3rd] and not 3th
well done!:)
sorry I misspelled possible