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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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A cake with five candle, two are red and three are blue.
These dogs are seven but, two are not mine.
This house is big, have seven room and two bathroom.
Eight cars are mine. Five is not her. one is of my cousing.
One house is withe, two are not white are green.
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  • Shin
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    There is a cake with five candles. Two of them are red and three of them are blue. There are seven dogs. Two of them are mine. There is a house. The house is big and it has seven rooms and two bathrooms.

    From here, a little confusing,

    You need to mention@ how many cars there are firstly@

    I have eight cars. She(My friend) does not have five cars. One of them is my cousin's. There are 3 houses. One of them is white. Rest of them are not white but green.

    Hope it will help you!
    Submitted over a year ago
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