English Writing Exercise

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• 2009-11-04 06:08:16

  jmoorhead
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  I would be able to understand your written work without any trouble.  A more correct version might read like this:

  "Hello! I would would like to order sandwiches for my friends and I this evening.  We would all like coffee, orange drinks and tea without sugar."

  You wrote:

  Excuse me,I will order a sandwich for my friends and I in this evening,We all like the coffe,oranges and tea without sugre.

  A proper version of what you wrote would be written like this:

  "Excuse me, I will order sandwiches for my friends and I this evening.  We would all like coffee, and tea without sugar."

  Just note - it is unlikely you would order both coffee and tea with a meal.  Also, sugar would be at your table, a restaurant would never add it to a drink, you would always add it yourself.

  Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.

   

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