Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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Excuse me,I will order a sandwich for my friends and I in this evening,We all like the coffe,oranges and tea without sugre.
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I would be able to understand your written work without any trouble. A more correct version might read like this:
"Hello! I would would like to order sandwiches for my friends and I this evening. We would all like coffee, orange drinks and tea without sugar."
You wrote:
Excuse me,I will order a sandwich for my friends and I in this evening,We all like the coffe,oranges and tea without sugre.
A proper version of what you wrote would be written like this:
"Excuse me, I will order sandwiches for my friends and I this evening. We would all like coffee, and tea without sugar."
Just note - it is unlikely you would order both coffee and tea with a meal. Also, sugar would be at your table, a restaurant would never add it to a drink, you would always add it yourself.
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