My occupation
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
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Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires come true and different wonderful miracles happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in”. They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which, they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to be good and happy and all one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
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English Writing Exercise 
Irina...excellent! Not only your vocabulary but the use of capital letters and expressions.
Really good job. Keep it going!
great.
i hope to write that someday.
this is very good! I'm impressed
keep up the good work:)
i am jealous you :)
Very, very good. Some minor corrections. Excellent description of New Years.
Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really a wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it arrives. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires will come true and different wonderful miracles will happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in.” They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to will be good and happy and all of one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
great job!
Oscar.
Very good! Irina.
great job Irina! Your english is getting better and better.this text is very good!
Many great holidays and anniversaries are celebrated in our country. But my favorite holiday is New Year's Day, of course. It is a really a wonderful holiday. People get ready for this holiday long before it arrives. They buy New Year trees and decorate them. Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house and every family on New Year's Eve. Children and even grown-ups wait for this day because they believe that all their wishes and desires will come true and different wonderful miracles will happen on that day. On New Year’s Eve people get together to see “the old year out and the new year in.” They eat tasty food, drink champagne, dance and have a good time together. They wish each other happiness and good luck in the New Year and put the presents under the New Year tree. Children like this holiday very much. They wait for New Year presents, which they believe, Father Frost brings to them. Everybody is merry on that day and wishes the next year to will be good and happy and all of one's troubles and disappointments to remain in the past
Excellent text. I have one doubt about the sentence "Every year a fairy-tale comes to every house". A 'fairy-tale' is a story. Do you mean a 'fairy'?
After reading I have felt the approach of the New Year. It's cool!!!! It's wonderful holiday. And of course it's my favorite holiday too. ... And soon it will be your birthday!!!!
great!
:)
Fine job.
Very well.Ididn't see a certain mistake.