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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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Hi,I'm from China,my hometown is Chongqing which is in the westsouth of China,and now I live in Nanchang city in Jiangxi province,which is in the south of China.our capital is Beijing,which is in the north of China.At last,Pearl of the Orient is in the Shanghai city,which is in the east of China.
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  • Nicholas
    Mochapoints: 16418  |  Teacher Score: 14954 (99%)

    This is very good.  Some small corrections.

    Hi. I'm from China. My hometown is Chongqing which is in the southwest of China.  and Now I live in Nanchang city in Jiangxi province,which is in the south of China. Our capital is Beijing, which is in the north of China. Finally, the Pearl of the Orient is in the Shanghai city,which is in the east of China.

    In english we would not say "Shanghai city".  It would either be "the city of Shanghai" or just "Shanghai"

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