Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I have a very cute family, my father is tall and fat he looks angry but he is so friendly, my mom is so sweet and happy woman. I have 1 bother he is younger than me he only is 3 years old and is very funny and naugty, my sister is older than me she is 22 years old and she is a very study person and so intelligent, i love my family we have a lot in common and we feel great with each other. We have a pet is my sister's dog and its name is Tobby.
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Irene,
good
job!
It's really good but there are just some slight adjustments:
I have a very cute family. My father is tall and fat. He looks angry, but he is so friendly. My mom is so sweet, and a happy woman. I have one brother, he is younger than me. He is only three years old. He is very funny and naughty. My sister is older than me, she is 22 years old. She is a very studious person, and is so intelligent. I love my family. We have a lot in common and we feel great with each other. We have a pet that is my sister's dog, and its name is Tobby.
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I have a very cute family, my father is tall and fat he looks angry but he is so friendly, my mom is so sweet and happy woman. I have 1 brother. He is younger than me, he only is 3 years old and is very funny and naugty. My sister is older than me she is 22 years old and she is a very study person and so intelligent. I love my family, we have a lot in common and we feel great with each other. We have a pet, it is my sister's dog and its name is Tobby.