English Writing Exercise

Describing People

Using both a positive and a negative characteristic, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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sunny
The woman is not fat .she is thin.

The man is not short.he is tall.

The boy is not old.he is young.

The girl is short.she is not tall.
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Submitted: 2009-11-09 03:54:08




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  • 2009-11-09 03:54:08
    mrdeckard
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    Good job!  Be sure to capitalize the first word of each sentence and double space between periods when typing.  You could also put a comma in each sentence...ex. The woman is not fat, she is thin.

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