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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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I'm teacher.I education to more than 15 years, the Portuguese language (Brazil) and Brazilian literature, I love teaching, I'm very happy about it .
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  • Istvan Janki
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    The most popular event that happens here in Brazil is Carnival. There are three days of national holiday. It is a fantastic festival that is celebrated in all parts of the country and some states have  four days of party. The festival begins on Saturday and lasts until Tuesday . We have people from all countries of the world, it is a wonderful fest.

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  • Niki Kuolema
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    The most popular event that happens here in Brazil is the Carnival. are three days of national holiday It is a fantastic festival that is celebrated throughout the country and lasts three days being a national holiday. Some states have four-day festival which begins on Saturday and goes on (lasts) until Tuesday. We have people from all over countries of the world, it is wonderful.

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  • Don Moore
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    The most popular event that happens here in Brazil is the Carnival. It is three days of our national holiday and is a fantastic festival that is celebrated throughout the country. Some states have a four-day festival which begins on Saturday and goes until Tuesday . We have people come from all countries of the world. It is wonderful.

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  • Silvano
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    The most popular event that happens here in Brazil is the Carnival. There are three days of national holiday, that is a fantastic festival that is celebrated throughout the country. In some states it goes on four days. The festival begins on Saturday and continues until Tuesday. We have people from all the countries of the world (from all over the world. It is wonderful.

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  • *Guillermo MG ...
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    Nice work, Zaira! Please note my corrections.

    The most popular event here in Brazil is Carnival, three days of national holiday. It is a fantastic festival that is celebrated throughout the country. In some states there are four days of festival from Saturday through Tuesday. We have visitors from all countries of the world. It is wonderful.

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  • RONAN MOREIRA
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    I would say:

    The most popular event in Brazil is the Carnival, there are three days of national holiday. It is a fantastic Parade that is celebrated throughout the country, in some Brazilian states there are four-day of parade and festival begins on Saturday until Tuesday . We are visted by people from worldwide countries, that's wonderful.

     

    My friend, ask me some pictures from Vila Isabel, every year I go to the parade in Passarela do Samba - Rio, I love to take part of it, and this is a good opportunity to do a social work with the children in this important community in Rio de Janeiro.

    Bye!

     

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