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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Daniele's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is fat
the man is short
the boy is poor
the girl is thin
you are rich
i am is old
Submitted over a year ago

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  • golesorkh_sorkh...
    Mochapoints: 23684  |  Teacher Score: 3111 (88%)

    Good Job!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Jon
    Mochapoints: 1265  |  Teacher Score: 198 (0%)

    Hi Daniele

    What you have done is OK but the exercise is asking for 2 descriptions for each person.

    For example "The man is old and fat"

    Also in your last one you have put "I am is old". As you are reffering to yourself is should be "I am old" But age is relative, to me you look fairly young!

    Submitted over a year ago
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