Inglés Escribir Exercise

Saliendo a vacaciones

Describe vacaciones que estás tomando ¿Cuándo y dónde estás yendo? ¿Qué vas a hacer?

Autor:
Lorena
I'm going to Porto Seguro. It's a coastal city in Bahia. The beach is very good, specially at Arraial da Juda. There are places calm and with a lot of people, like Bahamares and Axé Moi. The food is delicious. The aquatic park in Arraial da Juda is so cool. Well, on my vacations, I am going to Porto Seguro and I will visit every place that I talked about. I hope a shiny sun, better sunny days.
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Enviado: 2009-11-07 19:01:21



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  • 2009-11-07 18:56:41
    runner

    2 changes, the rest is good.

    "There are calm places and places with a lot of people, like Bahamares and Axé Moi."

    "I hope for a a shiny sun, and better sunny days."  You might just say, "I hope it will be sunny while I am there."

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  • 2009-11-07 19:01:21
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    Very good!

    There are calm places and some with a lot of people.

    I hope fur sunny days (or) I hope that we will have sunny days / sunny weather.

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