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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today it's the 8th of November. The sun is shinning. It is quite high temperature (The temperature is quite high). It's not raining. I suppose that tomorrow the weather will be the same, with no forecast of rain.
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  • Don Moore
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    Today it's the 8th of November. The sun is shining. It is quite high temperature (The temperature is quite high). It's not raining. I suppose that tomorrow the weather will be the same, with no forecast of rain.

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  • Niki Kuolema
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    Almost perfect! Bravo!

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  • Enrique
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    It is quite a high temperature

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  • KISH@KIND
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    HELLO/ HOLA /OI /SALUT

    GREAT JOB

    KEEP IT UP,

    BEST WISHES FOR FUTURE LIFE

    TAKE CARE

    SEE YOU AGAIN

    follow DAN MOORE

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  • Istvan Janki
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    Today it's 8th of November.(without THE) The sun is shinning. It is a quite high temperature (The temperature is quite high). It's not raining. I suppose that tomorrow the weather will be the same, with no forecast of rain.

     very good

      keep studying

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  • Martin
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    Today it's the 8th of November. The sun is shinning shining. It is a quite high temperature (The temperature is quite high). It's not raining. I suppose that tomorrow the weather will be the same, with no forecast of rain.

    Very good!

    Martin

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  • *Guillermo MG ...
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    Great paragraph, Zaira!

    Today is the 8th of November. The sun is shining. The temperature is quite high. It's not raining. I suppose that tomorrow the weather will be the same, with no forecast of rain.

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  • claudio j zatte...
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    great job my friend.

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