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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today it is sunny and it is warm; for this, I am wearing sunglasses. It´s cloudy now. The woman is wearing scarf. It´s snowing now and the people are wearing hat and sweater. The weather is raining.
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  • RWB
    Mochapoints: 388  |  Teacher Score: 146 (0%)

    it's snowing now and the people are wearing hats and sweaters. 

     

    This is how your sentence should read the other sentences are excellent. Good job!!

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  • farishty
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    Okay!

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  • Lalith
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    Today it is sunny and it is warm; for this, I am wearing sunglasses. It´s cloudy now. The woman is wearing a scarf. It´s snowing now and the people are wearing hats and sweaters. The weather is raining.

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