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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

marie's submission: Average Rating:
A woman is not fat. She is thin.
A man is not rich. He is poor.
A boy is not tall. He is short.
A girl is not old. She is young.
You are not a boy. You are a girl.
I am not a man. I am a woman.
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  • idgetman05
    Mochapoints: 852  |  Teacher Score: 96 (0%)

    Very good job.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • thedragonfly88
    Mochapoints: 414  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    you did a great job,except that you should write "the"woman is not fat. or "the"girl is not old.

    a woman is not fat= Une femme n'est pas grosse. ca veut dire qu'une  femme ne serait jamais grosse. dont la femme/la fille (The) est approprie.(pardon les accents, j'ai pas les cles d'accents sur mon clavier :) )

    Submitted over a year ago
  • angie
    Mochapoints: 12384  |  Teacher Score: 9391 (99%)

    good

    Submitted over a year ago

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