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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today the weather is cold so I'm wearing a coat.
This Monday the weather will be very hot and I'll be wearing sunglasses.
This Friday the weather will be raining and I'll be wearing an umbrella.
Saturday will be cloudy and the man should use a scarf.
Tuesday will be warm and the boy should use a t-shirt.
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  • Manal salem
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    good job

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  • marcelamoya
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    Nice! but instead of saying the weather will be raining, you should say "will be rainy"

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  • sara
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    amazing keep going ;)

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  • Jayne
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    Good Rodrigo but you should say...................

    This Friday it could be raining, so I will use an umbrella.

    Tuesday will be warm and the boy should wear a t-shirt.

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