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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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The women is going to buy a new dress. The men is going to play football. I'm going to go for a walk. You are going to watch tv. The girl is going to visit her friend. The boy is going to read a book.
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  • Ramblin
    Mochapoints: 143941  |  Teacher Score: 137043 (100%)

    The women are going to buy new dresses. The men are going to play football. I'm going to go for a walk. You are going to watch tv. The girl is going to visit her friend. The boy is going to read a book.

    Because women is plural, dresses has to be plural also.  Men and women are plural, so we have to use are instead of is.  "I'm going to go for a walk." can be simply said "I'm going for a walk."
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  • Owen
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    Excellent work ^_^ I can't really add much to the comment that the person has said in the comment above. keep it up :)
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