Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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In my last vacation I went to Honey Island which is in the South of Brazil. It's a small Island and very beautiful place, where there are a lot of nature, it looks like a jungle. There are no cars over there. So you need to take a boat to get there, also it is not very costy. I was located in a small chalet, but very confortable. I went with my boy friend and we did a lot of things. For example if you would like to visit there, you can go for a walk on a track, following a map which they give to the people when you get to the Island. Moreover you can visit the military Fort, which is no longer used anymore. Even that, there are maybe 2 beatches, and many nice restaurants where you can find different types of food including the local food and a lots of types of fish. Honey Island is a very nice place to go with friends or with a partner. Many people from Europe when comes to Paraná use to visit there. It is a very tourist place so is easier to find an accommodation where they owners and employees speak English
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It would be:
1. also it is not very costly
2. but very comfortable
3. boyfriend is one word
4. are maybe 2 beaches
You wrote quite well....but always remember writing is like music. it has a nice tune, nice flow....so use short sentences, and write like a tune....consistent approach in writing.
For my last vacation I went to Honey Island which is in the south of Brazil. It's a small island and a very beautiful place. Nature is abundant there. It looks like a jungle. There are no cars there. You need to take a boat to get there. It is also not very costly. I stayed in a small chalet which was very comfortable. I went with my boyfriend and we did a lot of things. For example, if you would like to visit there, you can go for a walk on a trail. You just follow a map which they give to people when they get to the island. Moreover, you can visit the military fort which is no longer used anymore. Even that, There are, perhaps, two beaches and many nice restaurants where you can find different types of food. This includes the local food and many types of fish. Honey Island is a very nice place to go with friends or with a partner. Many people from Europe visit the island after they visit Paraná. It is a very tourist oriented place so it is easy to find an accommodation where the owners and employees speak English.
Very nicely done, Mariana.