Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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1) The men are at the table. The food is on the table. I am speaking on the table.
2) I ate the candy I found on the table, inside the box.
3) The flowers I received was in the box, I put them on the table.
2) I ate the candy I found on the table, inside the box.
3) The flowers I received was in the box, I put them on the table.
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I ate the candy that I found on the table, inside the box.
3) The flowers that I received was in the box, I put them on the table.
You continue to improve, Juliana! Here are some edits:
1) The men are at the table. The food is on the table. I am speaking at the table. 2) I ate the candy I found on the table, inside the box. 3) The flowers I received were in the box, and I put them on the table.
You are doing great!
Juliana, you´re doing fine. Pay attention to the following points: "1) The men are at the table. The food is on the table. I am speaking on the table [você subiu na mesa ?]. 2) I ate the candy [that] I found on the table, inside the box. 3) The flowers I received were in the box, I put them on the table". Keep up the good work!