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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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Today I went shop with my brother. We bought some groceries at the super market. We bought the usual things to be consumed during the month. Ordinary things like oil, flour, meat, rice, shampoo, thoothpaste, margarine, etc. We spent over an hour to buy everything. It cost about R$ 393.
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  • Mike
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    Today I went shopping with my brother. We bought some groceries at the super market. We bought the usual things to be consumed during the month. Ordinary things like oil, flour, meat, rice, shampoo, thoothpaste, margarine, etc. We spent over an hour buying everything. It cost about R$ 393.

    Excellent!

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  • melek
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    Today I went shopping with my brother. We bought some groceries at the supermarket. We bought the usual things to be consumed during the month. Ordinary things like oil, flour, meat, rice, shampoo, toothpaste, margarine, and so on. We spent over an hour there to buy everything. It cost about $393.

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    Excellent.

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    Good Job!!!!

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