Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The woman has long blonde hair and I like her!
I saw a man and he has brown moustache and red hair.
a girl on the bus had straight white hair.
the boy has a back bear but he is bald.
you haven't moustache. you aren't bald. you haven't beard.
I has curly blonde hair. I have black beard. I haven't moustache.
I saw a man and he has brown moustache and red hair.
a girl on the bus had straight white hair.
the boy has a back bear but he is bald.
you haven't moustache. you aren't bald. you haven't beard.
I has curly blonde hair. I have black beard. I haven't moustache.
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The woman has blonde long hair and I like her! I saw a man and he has a brown moustache and red hair. a girl on the bus had straight white hair. the boy has a black beard but he is bald. you don't have a moustache. you aren't bald. you don't have a beard. I have blonde curly hair. I have a black beard. I don't have a moustache.
Hey Milord,
I made several corrections in red to what you submitted.
The woman has long blonde hair and I like her! I saw a man and he had a brown moustache and red hair. A girl on the bus had straight white hair. The boy had a black bear but he is bald. You haven't a moustache. You aren't bald. You haven't a beard. I have curly blonde hair. I have a black beard. I haven't a moustache.
say "a brown moustache". "I have curly blonde hair" instead of "I has"
The woman has long blond hair and I like it.
I have curly blond hair.
"Blond" is an adjective that refers to the hair itself. A man can have blond hair but he is never a "blonde".