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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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The pancakes are the popular meal in Russia. The pancakes are the culinary product which prepared from the liquid test. The pancake has a round form. Pancakes move with a different snack. Pancakes are one of the most ancient products of a Russian cuisine. There are a lot of ingredients used to make this meal, for example eggs, flour, salt, sugar, oil, milk and others.
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  • Manny
    Mochapoints: 12962  |  Teacher Score: 1206 (79%)

    Pancakes move with a different snack.

    how does pancake moves?
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  • vini
    Mochapoints: 4166  |  Teacher Score: 864

    great>>

    ..Pancakes are the most popular meal....

    The pancakes are the culinary product wich ARE prepared from A liquid test.

    ...one of the most ancient products of Russian cuisine....

     
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