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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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The pancakes are the popular meal in Russia. The pancakes are the culinary product which prepared from the liquid test. The pancake has a round form. Pancakes move with a different snack. Pancakes are one of the most ancient products of a Russian cuisine. There are a lot of ingredients used to make this meal, for example eggs, flour, salt, sugar, oil, milk and others.
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  • John
    Mochapoints: 1598  |  Teacher Score: 628 (0%)

    Pancakes are a popular meal in Russia.

    Pancakes are a culinary product which are prepared from liquid batter.

    Pancakes have a round form.

    Pancakes move with a different snack. -- I'm not sure what you mean by 'move'

    Pancakes are one of the most ancient products of Russian cuisine.

    There are a lot of ingredients used to make this meal, for example eggs, flour, salt, sugar, oil, milk and others.

    Not bad!

     
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  • looody
    Mochapoints: 10828  |  Teacher Score: 6610 (0%)

    Very good..
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