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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

ait.khalid's submission: Average Rating:
- My wife cooks a delicious dinner at seven o'clock.
- I start work at nine o'clock
- This boy always plays football in weekend at ten o'clock.
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  • Brad
    Mochapoints: 2603  |  Teacher Score: 2077 (100%)

    Good job.  Be careful with the punctuation.

    My wife cooks a delicious dinner at seven o'clock.  I start work at nine o'clock.  This boy always plays football on weekends at ten o'clock.

    Use this boy, the boy, or my boy, depending on what you want to say.

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  • Mary
    Mochapoints: 24032  |  Teacher Score: 11954 (99%)

    Good sentences. I agree with Brad, be sure to use proper punctuation.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Chanel
    Mochapoints: 6136  |  Teacher Score: 5524 (88%)

    good but your statement should be "my wife wil cook a delicious dinner at seven o'clock. I will start work at nine o'clock. Every weekend at ten o'clock the boy plays football"

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