English Writing Exercise

Describing People

Using both a positive and a negative characteristic, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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Jpaulo
She is not fat. She is thin. He is not rich. He is poor. The boy is not old. He is young. The girl is not tall. She is short. I am not a woman. I am a man. You are not young. You are old.
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Submitted: 2009-11-14 23:45:12




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  • 2009-11-14 23:45:12
    Jamie
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    It's perfect. The only thing I would say is that you could separate the related phrases with commas. For example:

    She is not fat, she is thin.

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