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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Jpaulo's submission: Average Rating:
She is not fat. She is thin. He is not rich. He is poor. The boy is not old. He is young. The girl is not tall. She is short. I am not a woman. I am a man. You are not young. You are old.
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  • Jamie
    Mochapoints: 30147  |  Teacher Score: 22887 (100%)

    It's perfect. The only thing I would say is that you could separate the related phrases with commas. For example:

    She is not fat, she is thin.

    Submitted over a year ago
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