A Shopping Trip
Instructions:
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4
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Last time I went to a shop yesterday. I work every day from Monday till Friday so I'm shopping for something to eat at weekends. I was shopping with my son. We were shopping some food. I like healthy food. These are different cheese, hard and soft, curd, eggs, fish and seafood, turkey, some sweets, coffee beans etc. I was trying the perfume, but I did like nothing.
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The last time I went to a shop was yesterday. I work every day from Monday till Friday so I go shopping for something to eat at weekends. I was shopping with my son. We were shopping for food. I like healthy food. I bought different cheese, hard and soft, curd, eggs, fish and seafood, turkey, some sweets, coffee beans etc. I tried some perfumes, but I did not like any.
Good work Ann, a few mistakes but that is normal when we are learning.
Last time I went to shop was yesterday. I work every day from Monday till Friday so I go shopping for something to eat at weekends. I was shopping with my son. We were shopping for some food. I like healthy food. These are different types of cheeses, hard and soft, curd, eggs, fish and seafood, turkey, some sweets, coffee beans etc. I did try some perfume, but I didn't like anything.
Last time I went shopping was yesterday. I work every day from Monday till Friday, so I shop for something to eat at weekends. I was shopping with my son. We were shopping for some food. I like healthy food. I bought different cheeses, hard and soft, curd, eggs, fish and seafood, turkey, some sweets, coffee beans etc. I tried the perfumes, but I didn't like anything.
I wasn't quite sure what you meant with "These are different cheese..." It could be I bought..., or perhaps, there were... meaning you looked at them without necessarily buying. ))
Yesterday was the last time I went to a shop, and I was with my son. As I work every day from Monday till Friday, I have to do my shopping for something to eat at weekends. We wanted to buy some food. I especially like healthy food. These are different cheeses, both hard and soft, curd, eggs, fish and seafood, turkey, some sweets, coffee beans, etc. I tried some of the perfumes, but I did not like any of them.
Hello Ann. This is very good, but I removed some of your "shopping" = you wrote it so many times!
I have changes some of your sentences to give you an idea of different ways of writing.
A good attempt.
Hi Ann, You have written this very well. There are just one or two things to change and these are... The last time I went to a shop was yesterday. so I go shopping for... We were shopping for some food, and these were, different hard and soft cheeses, ...... I like healthy food. I was trying on perfume, but I didn't like anything. Okay. Brenda
Very good, but I suggest following corrections:
The last time I went to a shop was yesterday.
I work every day from Monday to Friday......
We were shopping for some food.
There are different cheeses.....
I tried the perfumes but did not like any (of them).