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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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Today I going to go to the supermarket because I need to buy some groceries. After I going to go to the bank for to get money. After that I going to drive to home. Finally I going to cook because my family coming to visit me.
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  • hamzovitch
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    Today I am going to go to the supermarket because I need to buy some groceries. After that I going to  will go to the bank for to get some money. After that ( or Then ) I going to will drive back to home. Finally I am going to cook because my family coming to will visit me today.
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  • Misha
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    Alex. Nce sentences.

    Today I am going to go to the supermarket because I need to buy some groceries. After  I am  going to go to the bank for to get money. After that I going to drive to home. Finally I am   going to cook because my family is coming to visit me.

    When you are using words like: going, cooking, or other words ending in   ING, you need to have the verb TO BE, conjugated, of course.

    You can also say: ....to the bank to get some money.

    You can also say......drive to my house or my   friend's house. In which case you can use TO.

    These are small nuances that with time, reading, and more exercises, all will fall into place

    Keep it up!   Misha
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  • Parker13
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    Hello Alex,Very good exercise and I think the other corrections are ok but not perfect.

     If you need help add me as a friend!
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  • ash
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    After words, i m going to the bank to get money.  Then I will drive home.  ------because my family are coming to visit.
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