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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.

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The young lady is leaning on the wall of supermarket, because she is waiting for her friends. The manager is going to push the mouse button, because he is going to work right now. The girl is pushing a button for the television. The boy is carrying his backpack in the morning. You are opening the curtains because is too dark inside your home. I'm riding a bike, because I like do exercise
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  • jondr
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    muy bueno ;^)

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  • Misha
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    Hola Alex!

    Nice sentences. Two corrections:

    You're leaning on the wall. I think that's what you meant; leaning means standing against.

    You normally push a cart in the supermarket.

    Stay with it, it's coming along just fine. Misha

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  • Misha
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    The young lady is leaning on the wall of the supermarket, because she is waiting for her friends. The manager is going to push the mouse button, because he is going to work right now. The girl is pushing a button for the television. The boy is carrying his backpack in the morning. You are opening the curtains because it is too dark inside your home. I'm riding a bike, because I like to exercise..

     Another way would be: ...because I like the exercise.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Don Moore
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    The young lady is leaning on the wall of supermarket, because she is waiting for her friends. The manager is going to push the mouse button, because he is going to work right now. The girl is pushing a button for the television. The boy is carrying his backpack in the morning. You are opening the curtains becauseit is too dark inside your home. I'm riding a bike, because I like to exercise
    Submitted over a year ago

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