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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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i traveled to japan next year. it's close by my hometown. it's 500km from my hometown. it cost 500$ to travel to japan
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  • LOL
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    travelled last year ..... nice work !! hi five !

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  • Stacy June
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    iI will traveled to jJapan next year. iIt's close by to my hometown. iIt's 500km from my hometown. iIt costs $500$ to travel to jJapan.

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  • arielle
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    "i'm going to japan next year."

    good job though

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  • 영교
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    they are asking for your last vacation.not in the future.

    i will go traveled to japan next year. it's close by from my hometown. it's 500km from my hometown here. it costs 500$ to travel to japan.

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  • gene
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    good try.

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  • Rhience
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    Stacy said it all :) Pretty good though :))

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  • Lili
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    WOW , I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO JAPAN , SOUND GREAT !

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  • ♥Kat
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    "I will travel (traveled means you did this in the past) to Japan next year. It's close to my hometown. (or, it's by my hometown) It's 500km from my hometown. It costs $500 (put the $ sign in front of the money value) to travel to Japan. (or "it will cost $500 to travel to Japan."

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  • korin niki
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    i hope i dont offend you but your first sentence is grammatically wrong..i'll ask you, have you gone to japan already? if so, the first sentence is right but then as i read the next sentence it does not support the first sentence so it should be "i will travel to japan next year".."traveled" is a past tense of the word travel and if you put "will" before it, it will become a future tense of the word travel..

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  • NiuNiu
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    I will travel to Japan next year.

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  • Thiago Wallys
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    traveled -> it's in the past

    I will travel to japan next year ( Future Form )

    '' I'll (will) travel to japan next year. It's close by my hometown. It's 500km from my hometown. It costs 500$ to travel to japan ''

     

     

    Keep Studyin'

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  • Beatriz lima
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    This story is true? Good work Lovememory.

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